

João-Maria
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607 - heartbreak Flames now shape a dulled european growth. The sky outlines the faintest struggle. Part of it is smoke. Part of it is memory. My mother conjures up a sigh for her fifty-seventh summer. She wishes for us to be children again, and she regrets having demanded so much of us. A road narrows along our irises; the limit of our youth is a dark echo. We bloomed without a bud. We went missing. We will never be absolved of the space we occupied of the space we left empty of the space we consumed oh, how dinky flattened dandelions were we. Blank storms in a night stalling dreamlessly.
Powerful poetry. The final verse “We will never be absolved…” poignant. This gives me pause…as it should. Thank your
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Thank you, Suzette. I missed you!
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Oh, thank you! 😊
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Very touching and relatable, I found myself thinking and relating my feelings to this part especially: “A road narrows along our irises; the limit
of our youth is a dark echo. We bloomed
without a bud. We went missing.”
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Thank you so much, Oloriel…
The line of the budless blooming was the hardest to make up. It’s difficult to express the skipping of a stage of development. Or to speak of youth without its common flair of nostalgia.
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As a mother, I can feel this atmosphere, even if my wishes and regrets are not quite the same. But the 4th stanza is just right. (K)
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I find it harder and harder to understand my mother. I think she did her best, surely, but it was a hard best for us. Sometimes too hard.
It’s unimaginably difficult to be a parent, though, and I can’t imagine doing better. I can’t imagine it at all.
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I think the generations always have a hard time understanding each other. I see it from both sides.
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Oh how I wish I could tell the truth like you João-Maria. Thanks for your prose and poetry and presence
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Thank you, Riham!
We all have our truths, and very, very rarely, we also have the truth of others. That’s the beauty of creating.
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I have no truths!
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That’s one of the many enviable things about you, E.
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The other being measured in inches?
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Hahahahahah, I’m not quite sure, but thankfully for me I never measure anything in inches. I’m team centimetres.
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Wonderful write ✍💖
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Thank you, d.a., happy to have you back 🙂
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You are most welcome
I’m delighted to see you again too
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Yes, powerful is the word I’d use to describe this too, and it tugs at the heart. Beautiful writing.
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Thanks a ton, Leyde. It’s always incredibly nice to read such warm compliments.
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You are sincerely welcome!!
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Wonderful poem!
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Thank you so much, Dawn.
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Stunning work.
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Thank you so much, Julie.
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Beautiful poem, Joào-Maria, it’s a bit gloomy but I like the feeling it transfers.
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Very gloomy. But it’s getting easier and easier for me to write from a place of happiness as well. Which is good.
Thank you so much for reading, Felicien.
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I am glad to hear that.
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I especially like this image: “dinky flattened dandelions”!
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I struggled to get that one right but I’m glad someone appreciates those lines. It is a particular image, and a very sad one as well.
Thanks for reading!
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I find myself returning to this poem, moved by how much I relate to it especially in the second and third stanza. You have put it so well, that process of looking back and realizing. To me it truly is a powerful and well penned poem! Your writing is one I really admire!
Wishing you well always!
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Thank you so much, Nolsen. I read one of your poems the other day and it also surprised me greatly. You write very well, to my standards at least, and I’m happy to be admired by someone such as yourself.
I’m unsure if I penned the process well, because I’m not the one inside the process, but rather a point of it. It isn’t rare, though, that we feel processes so vividly when we are the objects of the process.
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You are very welcome! your reply left me so encouraged (i was only able to read it as I am in the process of moving),but it has been on my mind all these days and it truly means so much to read that from you. Thank you!
there is something about the imagery you use and how the stanzas are interwoven that made the poem so immersive. I think indeed, it isn’t rare, how deeply they can be felt.
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How to put your memories down into magic, i am so impessed by your work. It feels so delightful whenever i read you. Keep doing what you do, thank you
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Thank you so much, Drew. You are always so nice to me. I’m really happy you are still around despite my huge interruptions in posting.
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Good to see you back
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Beautiful !!!
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So good and soothing to the thoughts I love you and your post thanks
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Wow !❤️🌻
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Beautiful…very touching… powerful lines💓😊🙏
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Beautiful, yet sad. I love it!
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Beautifully written! 🥰
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Very touching!
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Dinky, flattened dandelions!
(wish I’d thought of that)
Lovely jubbly, my friend.
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Memory and smoke—very powerful.
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