


João-Maria
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610 Before Bach there was time, and smiles and white roses. Heaven was a downed architecture, and god was an asthma whispering by in Phrygian tombs. The sky was shaped like a serpent and at night everything coiled in tiny iridescent drops. noise flitted to where the world wasn’t, even before the world became the noise left behind. 611 I place things (to place things) (to give them place) and I name the places (to name places) (to give them name) and I lose things (how could I have done this?) and I forget names (every end is glass migrating around the flesh of one’s arms and hands foraging the nightmares) (to regret) 612 Summer wood chortles tense like a drunken dawn. A city can be a glorious place. The morning can be beautiful and soak the skin with milky foam. The hand finally comes, indomitable, to cradle you while the gulls dance. You are fed, you feed. It is so, to spill and to emerge, it is so…
What a painting there, and fine collection of words, feelings and images as its accompaniment. To serpent-shaped skies and iridescent drops my friend! Greetings from Deutschland, and peace be with you. I believe you said August is hard if I remember right, hope it is less so for you this year. Bill
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What’s up, Bill?
This August is a strange one, but a better one too. Warum bist du in Deutschland? I was there very recently and hopefully I will be there again next year.
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Ich bin im Besigheim, bei Ludwigsburg in dem Suden! Mein Deutsch ist sehr primitiv, I’ve gotten used to saying that JM. Strange is 👍 okay, glad it’s besser too.
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Mein is auch ganz primitiv haha, ich benutze Deutsch nur für meine Arbeit, sonst nichts.
Aber der Süden ist der schönste, keine Debatte (ausser der Dialekt).
Enjoy Germany. It’s an amazing place if one yearns to be with oneself, especially near the mountains. It can be aggressively peaceful and cozy.
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Ja, I am good with aggressively peaceful for sure. It is der schonste for sure! Damn wish I could get the umlauts (and less umleitungs).
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great poetry
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Thank you so much. My warmest wishes for your situation and for Ukraine. ❤
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I enjoyed you deep thinking on creation in #610. That last verse on the noise…”the world became the noise left behind’
– refreshing perspective on life/creation/big bang.
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Haha, you got me, Suzette. I’m not much of a believer but I wanted to make a “before god” poem. Before things, or before there was language wrapped around things.
I thought, what is the closest thing to god, for me? And that’s Bach. So you are totally right on the perspective of creation.
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Awesome writing as usual my friend. Cheers.
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Wonderful poem with vivid imagery. Enjoy your stay in Deutschland. It’s a wonderful country. A live in the neighboring Belgium.
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Deutschland is wonderful indeed, though for a Portuguese such as myself it can have some foibles. The weather tends to be miserable and the food sometimes shouldn’t be legally considered edible.
Everything else about Deutschland is amazing, and I always love to visit. I’ve never been to Belgium, though.
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Oh if you pass trough try our fries, wafffles and chocolate. Our found is legally considered edible 🙂
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I sure will. I’m a sucker for waffles and fries (not so much for chocolate).
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This is absolutely gorgeous. I especially love the second, third, and last two stanzas.
What a treat it is to read this glorious work of words.
Magical creative forms. Thanks for sharing with us.
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Thank you so much, Nadine! I’m really happy that you liked it.
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Quite lovely. I’m sleepily listening to a cello and your poetry drifts so easily along with it. A very nice way to end the day. Thank you and take care ☺️
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Oh, Ellie, so nice to see you again! I’m not listening to cello these days, but a lot of piano. There’s this album by Devendra Banhart and Noah Georgeson named “Refuge”, and what an apt name it is. It sounds so soothing.
I hope you’ve been leading a happy and healthy life, Ellie.
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Glorious!
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