They embed themselves I find and can be quite insistent. I really like your layout here, it matches the movement within the words, and this can make a huge difference to their power. I saw Leonardo’s Battle of Anghiari as the warhorses moved in their sleep, the men bouncing along later. Lovely piece João-Maria.
I’m sorry to hear that my dear, it’s true that well-placed words make all the difference sometimes, they fuel us when all else fails. I hope you rise again swiftly, sending love across the aether.
Hi Joao, I simply love this poem. I don’t know if your style is evolving or whether I’m learning how to read you. But I got this one! I think it’s the latter. Glad to see you in circulation. It’s been a little while. And thank you for your likes on my recent posts. It means a lot to me when you respond. You are likely on Christmas break from school now?
Hi Joao,
Dave again. Have you altered your web page? I can’t seem to find any comments but I know you get them. Would you send me a message to my email, please, and help me out RE your page? Thanks. (Don’t judge me; I’m from an age and time when there was no internet!) pastorfekete@gmail.com
Dave
Jao, It must have been an impressive sight watching dreaming warhorses. Your poem gives a feel for what that was like I often wondered what dogs were dreaming as they vocalized and moved in their sleep, especially my father’s hunting dog.
I hope you are feeling better. Best wishes for a new year filled with health and happiness!
I had a similar inspiration but with cats. They can also be rather expressive when they dream.
I’m feeling the best that I can. Kindest regards and a great new year to you as well. Stay safe!
(CALIATH) 
I like this. It makes me smell blood, and think of battle.
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That was certainly its inspiration, Bob. Glad to see you.
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You as well.
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Wonderful read, I love the first stanza.
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Thank you so much, Eob! I’m fond of it as well, for some reason.
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You’re most welcome. Feel better. 🙏🏼
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They embed themselves I find and can be quite insistent. I really like your layout here, it matches the movement within the words, and this can make a huge difference to their power. I saw Leonardo’s Battle of Anghiari as the warhorses moved in their sleep, the men bouncing along later. Lovely piece João-Maria.
– Esme waving away from upon her Cloud
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Thank you so much, Esme. This means a lot to me. I haven’t been too well and it truly energises me to feel the warmth of your words.
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I’m sorry to hear that my dear, it’s true that well-placed words make all the difference sometimes, they fuel us when all else fails. I hope you rise again swiftly, sending love across the aether.
– Esme Cloud doing just that.
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Hi Joao, I simply love this poem. I don’t know if your style is evolving or whether I’m learning how to read you. But I got this one! I think it’s the latter. Glad to see you in circulation. It’s been a little while. And thank you for your likes on my recent posts. It means a lot to me when you respond. You are likely on Christmas break from school now?
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Hi Joao,
Dave again. Have you altered your web page? I can’t seem to find any comments but I know you get them. Would you send me a message to my email, please, and help me out RE your page? Thanks. (Don’t judge me; I’m from an age and time when there was no internet!)
pastorfekete@gmail.com
Dave
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Jao, It must have been an impressive sight watching dreaming warhorses. Your poem gives a feel for what that was like I often wondered what dogs were dreaming as they vocalized and moved in their sleep, especially my father’s hunting dog.
I hope you are feeling better. Best wishes for a new year filled with health and happiness!
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I had a similar inspiration but with cats. They can also be rather expressive when they dream.
I’m feeling the best that I can. Kindest regards and a great new year to you as well. Stay safe!
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🙂
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This is an amazing poem by the way. I hope you are feeling better. Love & light, Jason
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Oh, thank you, Jason. That means a lot. I’m very glad you like it.
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Vivid imagery. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much.
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Extraordinary!!✨✨
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!!❣
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I found my mind wandering with your words. Great piece.
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